Monday 30 June 2014

Lone Robot description By Mackenzie H

WALT: use adjectives and to complete a piece of writing QUICKLY

one day i was walking in a place with trees up high and lefs on the ground. then for a few seconds later i saw black smoke in the sky. I thought to myself “ what is that black smoke in the sky?” I went close to it and i found a tran. It had a simble that on my body. So i hopped on the tran. i rubbed the symbol on my body and fell to sleep. To be continued...



2 comments:

  1. Cute robot. His eyes are to big for his face.

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