Monday 30 June 2014

Girl on a string description By Mackenzie

WALT: use adjectives and to complete a piece of writing QUICKLY

I was walking along the path when the sun was blocked by something circle. It was big and wide. It looked like the moon but it is showing in the day. there was something hanging onto the circle. It was hard to see without the sun. so hard. it was foggy and dark. it wasn't very windy at all. i looked some more and it was a girl hanging on a string for a billion.






    

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