Tuesday 5 May 2015

Man to the past part 2 another story.

Man to the past part 2 By Mackenzie
another story.


INTRO

In part 1 It said that me and oliver escaped from bad cop and we killed all the robots. what is bad cop up to this time? first 1 boy than 2 boys. is there a 3rd boy to help us?  

page 1 Chapter 1 The letter

1 year later after my first adventure nothing has been happening. this is boring. until 2 weeks later. Oliver went to his parents. at home i got a letter. Dear Mackenzie Help me please. You have to save me. I have trapped in 2013 and I NEED your help to get me out. ALIVE!!!
from jimmy.

Chapter 2 The 2nd Letter

I know from the moment i got that letter someone was in trouble. but i destroyed my time machine, but oliver said “whenever i am in danger you can use my time machine.” But just as i got ready for my mission, I got another letter.


Dear Mackenzie


You are going on another mission and you will need help.
so I got some info about a sword of power for your next mission.
If you are asking where the sword is, i don’t know because the sword is missing somewhere in the past. I think it is in 2013 at the I don’t know what you are up to Mackenzie but you can’t fight on your own.
you need help. I will help you for your mission.
From Oliver.
Oliver said it would take 2 days to get home and he didn't come back so i gave up and went on my own.

Chapter 3 Search for the sword



2 hours later I went for the time machine (knowing that the sword was in the past in the same year 2013) and the time control was better then my time machine. but this time my younger self could see me and if that happens it would cause completely bad damage to the space time continuum. and that woud be the end of the universe as we know it. so that means i have to go now… but what, whats this? I have to get it when BAM! BAM! BOOM!!! what happened?


Chapter 4 Its about time… i don’t get it



where am i? Back at the house? Oliver was wondered where i was but then STAB! SLING! SLING! i saw Oliver being killed… and once that happened i saw my reality changing into something dark. i saw him being killed because Oliver's time machine was like a time portal so i could see the future. so this is what it is like in 2013?


Chapter 5 30 minutes latter

still haven't found the sword and the worst part is i still cant get my mind together after oliver's death and lost the time portal. so i have been wondering around the 2013 city for 30 minutes now and still haven't found the sword of time portal. i can still picture his death in my head. i still couldn't find out how but one things for sure, however killed oliver is after me next. once i find the time portal, i will go back to the PAST! that doesn't sound right…


Chapter 6 finally



FINALLY i found the time portal but… Hey GET BACK HERE! (JUMP) (WOOOOOOOOO) And i saw the death of Oliver but this time jumped back 15 minutes before the death of Oliver. you. you killed him and it was you the whole time. bad cop. yes it was me and now, you can't fix it cos you're going to die too. but hold on, the sword came out of the portal of the past and so did jimmy.

Chapter 7 Let's finish this...for OLIVER



but i thought you needed to be saved. naa, i just found a way to save myself. Ok it’s 2 on 1 now get us in the past before Oliver's death (by you of course) and nobody gets hurt. bad cop smiled and said no. jimmy said give me the sword. and then immediately stabbed bad cop in the chest. huh? what! tear open his skin. A ROBOT!?!?!? the real bad cop was still out there and it's almost too late before Oliver's death!


TO BE CONCLUDED!!!



will we end this, once and for all? will we save Oliver? will bad cop die? find out in MAN THO THE PAST PART 3 It all ends here!

4 comments:

  1. Hi Mackenzie, I am very excited that you have continued your Man to the past story!! You have me sitting on the edge of my seat in suspense .... what will happen next? Can you give me a sneak peek ... please??? From Mum xx

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  2. Hi Mum. so bad cop was a robot and i have sent out a search to find him, bring him back and finish it. the only prob is it takes 2 weeks to get the radar working so we can trap him. see you soon mum. Love Mackenzie

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  3. Hi Mackenzie.
    I really like the story! I cant wait for part three!
    When will you be finished with part 3!

    Jimmy

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  4. Hi jimmy. did you read the first one? click the link that wound say my time machine in chapter 3 and that would take you to the part 1. i don't think part 3 will come out for a long time. see you soon. From Mackenzie

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