Friday, 22 August 2014

Big day out By Mackenzie H

WALT: describe a moment in time

I went up the steps as i wanted to get to the top. the others where racing as well for the same reason. I can here the water as it went whoosh down. i went down and once i got down i feel good and wet. it was so cool. this is the best 5 mins of my life.

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