Showing posts with label hanningbeddiscripchen. Show all posts
Showing posts with label hanningbeddiscripchen. Show all posts

Monday, 30 June 2014

Hanning bed discripchen By Mackenzie H

WALT: use adjectives and to complete a piece of writing QUICKLY

I stood under the dark of the tree. There was a ladder leading up. It was a rectangle shape. The shadow was big. It was swinging left and right. It was dripping water like it it was raining. the ground was wet from the water above.
There was a lamp and i climbed the ladder and I found a bed.

I jumped on the bed and jumped on it all day long.


hangingbed.jpg

Monday, 23 June 2014

Hanging Bed description

Hanging Bed description By Mackenzie

WALT: use adjectives and to complete a piece of writing QUICKLY

I stood under the dark of the tree. There was a ladder leading up. It was a rectangle shape. The shadow was big. It was swinging left and right. It was dripping water like it was raining. the ground was wet from the water above.
There was a lamp and i climbed up the ladder and I found a bed.
I jumped on the bed and jumped on it all day long


By Mackenzie H
hangingbed.jpg