Monday, 23 June 2014

Hanging Bed description

Hanging Bed description By Mackenzie

WALT: use adjectives and to complete a piece of writing QUICKLY

I stood under the dark of the tree. There was a ladder leading up. It was a rectangle shape. The shadow was big. It was swinging left and right. It was dripping water like it was raining. the ground was wet from the water above.
There was a lamp and i climbed up the ladder and I found a bed.
I jumped on the bed and jumped on it all day long


By Mackenzie H
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