message in a bottle narrative by Mackenzie H

WALT: Use the correct tense in my writing
WALT: Use strong verbs in my writing
WALT: I will use 1-3 paragraphs in my writing
NSL: To use more verbs and have 1 idea with lots of detail

One day I was walking at the beach and 5 minutes later I saw a bottle with a message in it. “What is that bottle doing here?, the sign said no littering.” I said. Just a few seconds later I realized there was a message in the bottle.

“I think I should take it home and see what the message is.” I said. Then i turned around and went back home. when i got home i opened the bottle. The message read “Good luck is coming your way tomorrow!”

“whatever i mean i am already lucky.” i said. does it mean i get more luck and be SO lucky, yes. The next day i woke up and i did all my jobs in 5 minutes. “WOW!” I said.

THE END!

Wicked Writing: Session - 3 Cold by Mackenzie H

Wicked Writing: Session - 3 Cold by Mackenzie H: WALT: personify cold The wind shoved me back so far. The rain was so heavy that it got into my eys. By Mackenzie H

javelin throw narrative by Mackenzie H

javelin throw narrative by Mackenzie H
WALT: use adjectives and to complete a piece of writing QUICKLY 

Today i got up at 8:00 am and said, “Today is the most important day because it is the final event for the commonwealth games.” I said. “The event is javelin throw, great because I am really good at throwing.” My peaceful mum and busy dad wished me good luck in the javelin throw event. 4 hours later I got where they held the event in Christchurch and found out who i was against. “OMG!” I said as i was against the tallest the strongest man I have ever seen in my life, Angus Oliver, but it was a good thing that I was fully trained for this even though I was smaller then him but I was a little bit nervous. “Let the event BEGIN!” the event starter said. I went first, then I got the javelin ready to throw, I ran, I threw and i got to the 60 meter mark. Then it was his turn and he got the 60 meter mark so we had to do it again, this time we both got 70 meters. “The final attempt to win.” said the event starter. I did it and got 80 meters. He did it and got… We were waiting for the score. It was 79.99 meters. “OMG YES!!!” I said. “MACKENZIE WINS!” said the event starter. It felt great to stand in 1st place. When I returned home with my gold mettle my mum and dad were so proud of me!


The end!

Ninjago a ninja's path - personal response

I think the genre of this book is adventure.

This book is about 6 ninja and a boy named loud garmadon.

My favourite character is Kai because he is the most fearless.

A-Z Kai 

Commonwealth games

I think the Commonwealth games are: 5 different type of sports. (i know of)
sport 1: sprint
sport 2: javelin throw
sport 3: long jump

sport 4: discus
sport 5: herdils

Other facts I know are: The commonwealth games are on a XBox 360 kinect game called kinect sports
There are ?? that can compete in the commonwealth games
There are 3 medals
medal 1: Gold
medal 2: Silver
medal 3: Bronze

Twelve doors

A evil clone of me sent to kill me.
A tornado as big and wide that it could sweep away heavy things.
A evil wizard with potions that could kill you.
An invisible man holding a gun.
A dragon with lasers coming out of his mouth.
A thunder storm that could set fire.
A evil robot as big as a TALL building.
A evil monster teacher. (like miss panther)
The hills coming to life and killing you.
A call saying you are going to die and then you do.
The end of the world with darkness.

Shape shift into anything i want.

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